书面表达中常见的句子错例
（一）汉语式英语
1. I get up at six o'clock . At six thirty go to school. ×
I get up at six o'clock. At six thirty I go to school. √
2. He teached us English had two years.×
He has taught us English for two years.√
It is two years since he taught us English. √
He taught us English two years ago.√
3. There are six teachers taught me since I studied at school.×
Six teachers have taught me since I have studied at school.√
4. We should help and study each other.×
We should help and learn from each other. √
5. Please everyone attend the lecture.×
Please attend the lecture, everyone.√
6. He very like music. ×
He likes music very much.√
He much likes music.√
7. There are a lot of boys play football on the playground. ×
There are a lot of boys playing football on the playground.√
8. I there is a lot of homework to do.×
I have a lot of homework to do. √
9. There is nobody turn to for help. ×
There is nobody to turn to for help.√
10. There was a dog tie to the tree.×
There was a dog tied to the tree. √
11. There is a lecture at 3:00,p.m . The lecture place is in the hall of our school. The lecture will be given by Professor Wang. ×
There is a lecture at 3:00,p.m.,which will be given by Professor Wang in the hall of our school.√
（二）名词与冠词使用中的错误
1. English teacher is young man.×
My English teacher is a young man. √
2. She enjoys wearing a blue trousers. ×
She enjoys wearing (a pair of) blue trousers.√
3. I heard a good news.×
I heard a piece of good news.√
（三）动词be误用
1.He is always help others.×
He always helps others.√
2. The teacher is a good teacher. We are all like him. ×
The teacher is a good teacher. We all like him.√
3. We were met again in the street.×
We met in the street again.√
（四）比较级使用中错误
1. Rose is taller than any student in their class. ×
Rose is taller than any other student in their class.√
2.Li Ming's pronunciation is better than any other student in his class. ×
Li Ming's pronunciation is better than that of any other student in his class.√
（五）句子结构中的错误
1.He would like to go out for a walk the weather is fine. ×
He would like to go out for a walk, for the weather is fine.√
2.We have five classes in the morning, we have two classes in the afternoon. ×
We have five classes in the morning; we have two classes in the afternoon.√
We have five classes in the morning, and we have two classes in the afternoon. √
We have five classes in the morning. We have two classes in the afternoon.√
（六）标点符号的误用
1. Zhang Ming is not old enough, he cannot go to school.×
Zhang Ming is not old enough. He cannot go to school.√
Zhang Ming is not old enough; he cannot go to school.√
2.Have you read 《Red Star Over China》?×
Have you read “Red Star Over China”? √
Have you read A Tale of Two Cities?√
3."I joined the League in 1995." he said. ×
"I joined the League in 1995," he said. √
4.I like Chinese、 maths、 history and English。×
I like Chinese, maths, history and English.√
5.Walk along this road。 and take the second turning on the left。×
Walk along this road, and take the second turning on the left.√
6. He was short and fat, he had no hair and....... ×
He was short and fat. He had no hair and.... √
（七）句子前后不连续不统一
1.When I was going out, it began to rain. ×
I was going out when it began to rain. √
2.I was born and grew up in Zhengzhou in 1988.×
I was born in 1988 and grew up in Zhengzhou.√
3. Some televison programs are harmful to children, so parents must be prevented from watching TV. ×
Some television programs are harmful to children, so parents must prevent their children from watching TV. √
4. While having our dinner, the doorbell rang. ×
While having our dinner, we heard the doorbell ringing. √
While we having our dinner, the doorbell rang. √
5. Having been told many times, but he still couldn't understand it.×
He had been told many times, but he still couldn't understand it. √
Having been told many times, he still couldn't understand it.
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